Sgt. Salt

1. Borken? 2. Belive? 3. Check spelling. :P 4. Put punctuation in. 5. This sounds like my emo magnetic poetry. 6. It sounds kinky. It needs a little work, but ...

Did you write the music before the lyrics or vice-versa? The lyrics don't seem to have much of a flow, but maybe when you have it all recorded it'll sound ...

That... was a confuzzling little story. Of course, it never finished properly, and there was no clear reason for the alien's attack (as aforementioned by others). At first I was ...

This needs a little work, but by a little I mean it needs to be hit by a sledgehammer a couple times before being put through a paper shredder, where ...

This is the most brilliant poem... ever. That I've seen. So far. Yeah. Fragments. From the combination of three absolutely beautiful poetic pieces to this medley of... poetry, it makes ...